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Rappelz, MMORPG! 8DD; Even though it isn't a FF7 or KH fan art... it's still a fan art of Rappelz LOL. /otz

Anyway, she looks more like a re-coloured lightning, XD ...
and can anyone spot Zack and Terra? ^^

Btw, how does the hand look? :s I practiced it...

..... And tomorrow's the start of term 2..... D: At least there's only half a year left of being year 8 LOL
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Critique by Rock-andLove Jul 19, 2010, 3:45:50 AM
OCTOPUS!
This.is.just.simply... B-E-A-UTIFUL.
I really like how you did the watermarks. Havnt seen anyone put a watermark that blends in with the picture so...creatively.
The way you colored it is perfect. The hair and the dress is just amazing. Even the fairies are awesome. XD
Everything is just so detailed. The fire, The random glowy magic balls, the texture of the dress, etc.


Three things though...
-The hand. It looks...sharp. lol.
Its very wobbly too.
Just a little bit more practice ~ and ull get there :)

-Some of the outlines
I dont know if you wanted it to be like that but some of the outlines are "sketchylooking". On the underarm, red fairies wing, and the lower part of the dress to be exact.

-You colored outside the lines (on some areas). LOL
and theres a random grey color on the lips.

But yeah. overall, A fantastic piece.
definitely DDworthy. :)

(bah! that was my very 1st critic. lol. hope i didnt sound too harsh)
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This is a very pretty piece! Lovely colour scheme going on here, I really like how it all harmonizes so well, and the small instances of orange and green with the fairies are a nice touch. I also like the motion conveyed in her hair and clothing, quite subtle but nicely done.

I think there are a few issues with the anatomy, namely her left hand. The fingers need more definition to show where the joints are, and the angle at which it's been drawn is a little odd, particularly as we can't see her foreshortened forearm behind it. Her right arm is a little out of proportion as well, it looks a bit too short perhaps.

I like her expression a lot, it's very natural and emotive. I would say that the head angle is a bit odd, her head is too far forward on the neck, and makes the neck too long.

My final comment is that I especially admire the gorgeous details on the clothing, and the soft glowing effect of the lighting.
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cutedevi Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
COOL
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
xD Thanks!
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cutedevi Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
no need ^^
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wow she's pretty <3
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
Thanks!!
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you are welcome ^^
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:iconcoleno:
coleno Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011  Professional
awesome and girl is swety ^^
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:iconfiveonthe:
Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011
XD Thankd
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Ruikochan Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011
youre from msia ? :D
u still play rappelz ?
im playing us server rappelz tortus server :)
huna lvl 91
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:iconfiveonthe:
Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011
Yep!
Haha, nooo... I uninstalled it. It was reallyfun to play though ^^
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salamanderFLAME Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2010
Lovely.:love:
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:iconakatsuki-chibi-otaku:
UGHHHH.
one of the guys that critiqued this, mr-glasses, was trolling on my friend and just being an asshole to her about things, saying "why do you want to write? your work is like eye-rape and you'll just end up like a begger on a street."
i cant believe you acepted his critique. yeah sure, there are problems with the anatomy but how he can be so blunt.. almost cruel about it.. i dont understand. im sorry that you had to deal with someone like that for such a nice peice of work.
honestly, i see that you've improved a bit from your old pics, and your proportions are still better then mine. so i like it.
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x-Aiko-chan-x Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2010
Get over it.
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010
:D I'm glad you see the brgither side of things.
I accepted it because, sure, he was blunt, but it sure did help me. He sat down, took the time to write a critique so it wouldn't be fair if I just declined it.
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:iconakatsuki-chibi-otaku:
hm. :shrug: i guess.
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:iconkid-umby:
Kid-Umby Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
Her right shoulder seems very off.
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:iconfiveonthe:
Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
I was told. :)
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pandaarya Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
i DO see Zack and Terra :) this is a very lovely pic!!!
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:iconfiveonthe:
Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
Haha, I'm glad you do! Thanks!
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Kjherstin Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
You have been featured on my journal and in the following news article: [link]
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LittleLorel Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm, you have put the pic to traditional art instead of digital. Otherwise it was worth to feature, really nice picture ^^
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Kjherstin Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010
Oh dear. Sorry about that. That's the 2nd little mistake I made :giggle:
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
Oh my, I've never been featured before! Thank you! :love:
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Kjherstin Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
Well it was about time then! :giggle:
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HetemSenar Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry I'm so late getting to this, I've been so very busy. xD

This is amazingly beautiful. :heart:
The faeries are adorable, and her outfit is spectacular. Also I see you've been practicing hands, they're starting to look better. :D

The only critique I can think to give is about the lighting. Closer to the glowing, firey things should be brighter than parts further away, and the further away parts also need to be darker to match the background. Also the lineart should more or less match the lighting in these places thereof. :)
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010
Aw okay, I noticed that after my other upload that this one looks a bit bad. X'D
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:iconhetemsenar:
HetemSenar Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Well even that being said and it needing a couple improvements, it is most definately far from looking 'bad', my friend. :heart:
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Akarui-Hane Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely!! *u* ~
I think you could put up some more life colors in the hair..or maybe a little bit more of luminosity ^^
but awesome drawing, keep up the good work! OuO
+fav
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010
Ok, thanks :)
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Akarui-Hane Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem ^^
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songstressoflight Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010
I love the colors!
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010
:tighthug:
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Miakas-sister Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010   Traditional Artist
It's sooo pretty!! :love: Aww, I envy your coloring technique :eager: I could never color something on the computer like this, not in a million years :XD:

About the hand...do you use guides or tutorials? Hands are very difficult, even for alot of great artists. Just drawing your own hand in several different positions each day could really help improve your skills.^^
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010
:aww: I've got a long way to go with colouring if I wanna be up to :iconyuumei:'s standards or :iconmurasaki-hoshi: ;3; ~

Ok, yeah, I do, I tried lots of tutorials on DA but they're all about comic hands, and if I drew that way it makes the anime character look cartoon... I tried re-styling it but it just went flunky. Anyway, I used refenreces but I'll practice every time I can :)
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Miakas-sister Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010   Traditional Artist
Aww, you don't have to meet anyone's standards, your coloring is gorgeous :aww: But like I said before, just practicing your own hand will really help :nod: That's what I learned in my art classes. Hmm, I agree with you about the tutorials, there aren't many good ones unfortunately...it may be worth the investment to buy some books on proportions. I could also scan a few pages out of some of my books and post em, if you'd like :meow:
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
Ok, will do that :D
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WLJ Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010  Student General Artist
Wow!!! That's superb!! Luv the details you've poured into it!! The colours are very soothing!!! ^__^ Excellent work!!! XD
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010
:heart: Thanks!
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WLJ Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010  Student General Artist
You're welcome! :hug:
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kaoSFell Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010
I honestly thought that this was the best Aqua fanart ever till I read the description. D:
It's quite good
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010
Hahaha, yeah, I would do another better Aqua fan art when I get the time :)
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MiakaLin Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010  Student General Artist
Ohhhhh I really, really looove this! :la:
U did sooo very well in it! :iconiloveitmoreplz:
A very excellent job u did here!
I hope to see more like this :nod:
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010
:heart: Thank youu Mia! <33 (can I call you that?)
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MiakaLin Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Student General Artist
^o^ Hey no probs! ohh of course u may! :hug:
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DreamOnHunni Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010
I would love to have written a critique for you but Unfortunatley Im not P.M :D Sorriiii x
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010
No problem darlin, you could just write it in comments :)
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DreamOnHunni Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010
I will do :D
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ffz3 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
OMG I used to play that! xD

Lovely artwork > w<
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Fiveonthe Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
OMG really? Awesome! XD
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