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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The proportions seem so out of place. An example would be her arms: Her left (Our right) looks extremely long in how you portray it. I mean, it reminds me of Mr.Stretch...
Her right (our left) looks extremely small. Almost reminds of the T-rex syndrome.
Her right shoulder (our left) looks as if it somehow melded into her body. It looks like it is permanently crippled and she is limited to an extremely small amount of movement with that arm.
Her breasts... Are uneven. Her left (our right) looks larger than her right (our left)... I mean, what happened? A botched plastic surgery comes to mind.
Her neck doesn't even seem centered. It looks like it was slammed onto her torso and glued there.
Finally, her hand that is seen... It looks so out of place with the style you're using. Almost like you added it afterwards.
Other than that... It's shiny.
I'm sorry for being blunt, but D.A. wants a fair critique and it is...
I think there are a few issues with the anatomy, namely her left hand. The fingers need more definition to show where the joints are, and the angle at which it's been drawn is a little odd, particularly as we can't see her foreshortened forearm behind it. Her right arm is a little out of proportion as well, it looks a bit too short perhaps.
I like her expression a lot, it's very natural and emotive. I would say that the head angle is a bit odd, her head is too far forward on the neck, and makes the neck too long.
My final comment is that I especially admire the gorgeous details on the clothing, and the soft glowing effect of the lighting.
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